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Sunshine

In the book “The Giver” as well as not knowing what colors are the people in “The Community” also don’t know what Sunshine is, of course the Sun is still there they just don’t feel it. The point of each poem related to “The Giver” is to explain these things to the people in “The Community” if we ever were to be there and we had to express it in a poem. Here is my poem:

The Power of Sunshine

Sunshine is an experience so epic and full of energy that it can never be contained only used.

Sunshine is the taste of burning in your mouth that you only feel when eating the spice of life.

Sunshine smells like the sulphuric smell of lava only stronger and more intoxicating.

Sunshine feels like a kiss of warmth but only when accepted can you truly feel warm.

Sunshine is the sound of the intense rumble of controlled power.

Sunshine is an experience so epic and full of energy that it can never be contained only used.

 

I think that this is a very good poem and the words in the poem are very strong and interesting words. Maybe it shouldn’t have been so deep and thoughtful, because poems like this may no appeal to the average 5th Grade reader.

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